Back in October, I participated in
hp_concrit_fest, a fun and useful fest in which participants pledged to provide -- you guessed it -- concrit. Based on people's comments and on a later "group beta" that I conducted on my flist, I have now revised the original story into one that (I hope) is better.
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Title: Much Abides, Version 2
Author:
kellychambliss
Characters: Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape, Albus Dumbledore
Summary: When Minerva awakens, she find herself near the Forbidden Forest with no idea how she got there.
Rating: PG-13
Word count: ~4800
Warnings/Content Notes: None
Author's Notes: My grateful thanks to my wonderful original beta,
therealsnape, and to the excellent flisties who participated in my "group beta" on this story:
perverse_idyll,
albalark, and
minervas_eule. My thanks, also, to the thoughtful participants at
hp_concrit_fest. It really does take a village to write a story! Any remaining problems with it are all my own.
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( Much Abides )
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Title: Much Abides, Version 2
Author:
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Characters: Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape, Albus Dumbledore
Summary: When Minerva awakens, she find herself near the Forbidden Forest with no idea how she got there.
Rating: PG-13
Word count: ~4800
Warnings/Content Notes: None
Author's Notes: My grateful thanks to my wonderful original beta,
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( Much Abides )