ext_23085 ([identity profile] kellychambliss.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kelly_chambliss 2010-01-19 02:15 am (UTC)

it's more that the ending wasn't prepared with the same richness and inevitability as the rest of the fic

Again, that's it exactly (I have a feeling I'll be saying this a lot about your comments /g/). It's the preparation issue.

subtle, elegiac atmosphere

This!

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