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2010-01-19 02:15 am (UTC)
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it's more that the ending wasn't prepared with the same richness and inevitability as the rest of the fic
Again, that's it exactly (I have a feeling I'll be saying this a lot about your comments /g/). It's the preparation issue.
subtle, elegiac atmosphere
This!
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Again, that's it exactly (I have a feeling I'll be saying this a lot about your comments /g/). It's the preparation issue.
subtle, elegiac atmosphere
This!