Feel free to change the "first lines" any way you like. They're just meant as incentive to write; nothing set in stone.

I'll try the time-limit as opposed to page-limit idea and let you know how it goes. God, I hate writing. Why do I do it?

Is there some sort of Janeway Fest page on the web somewhere? Where are we supposed to post our finished products? (assuming they ever get finished. Writing is hell.)

Good luck!